CH7:16

September 15th, 2012, 11:29 am

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Reply Tanako, September 15th, 2012, 11:37 am

Here is page 16. This is one of my favorite page because you get to see Minako and Haruhi together as if they are a couple. ^_^*

Anyways, I know you guys might have noticed a slight change on the website like the next and previous button that automatically appears when you mouse hovers over the page.
That's to help you guys access the pages better. I also added a down arrow on the top navigation menu bar on the "About" and "Extra" that's to also let you guys know it's a drop down. I don't know if some people already know about that but just in case I guess :D



Anyways, thanks to everyone who supports this comic and i hope you keep doing so. Don't forget to spread the word because Best advertising is word of mouth and I hope you guys can help promote Boy with a secret.
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Reply [/Max] <3, September 15th, 2012, 12:52 pm

Haruhi's smile is adorable~
This page makes me want them to really be a couple!
Nicely done, although there are a few grammatical errors. Keep up the good work!

Reply Razmoudah, September 15th, 2012, 4:24 pm

Typos. Okay, in the first panel you have two typos. The first is in the second 'line' she thinks. It should be 'His' to show possession, not 'He's' which is a contraction of he is.

The second one is in the following line. You switch from present tense in 'I'm' to past tense in 'fallen'. It either needs to be 'I'm falling' or 'I've fallen'. I hate to be so nit-picky, but those are both very basic errors.

Reply Comichero, September 15th, 2012, 11:55 pm

@Tanako: oh yes you have Improved very much in the coloring dfeparment I love the felshtones of minako on ther anivary page even her you can see the improvment

but wow minako is really getting into it I'd lay money down she tryies to kiss Haru here after crazy leaves

Reply Tanako, September 16th, 2012, 1:46 pm

@Razmoudah: Thank you. i got it handled. i don't know how i missed that one.

@[/Max] <3: lol i know. hopefully they do hook up.

Reply Razmoudah, September 16th, 2012, 2:15 pm

@Tanako: You should see some of the ones I've made when trying to type when I first get up. They make yours very simple to follow in comparison.

Reply Tanako, September 16th, 2012, 3:15 pm

@Comichero: lol yea she does like him but does he like her back? i guess well have to find out with the next couple of pages. and oh, this chapter is almost over. the next two chapters I'm gonna post is were "shit gets real". lol i cant wait.

Reply Tanako, September 16th, 2012, 3:16 pm

@Razmoudah: lol, you think so? I'm considering taking a grammar class because i will like to improve my writing skills. but with school and every other things i don't have time. but as soon as i graduate i will take a mini course in writing so i can improve.

Reply Comichero, September 17th, 2012, 12:30 pm

@Tanako: Careful hun with my asweom powers of dedutive reasoning I might figure out your plan

Reply Razmoudah, September 17th, 2012, 1:37 pm

@Tanako: I have read worse, not often and mostly on FAQ/Walkthroughs for a game (and even then usually ones that predate the spell checker), but my brother is actually a lot worse than you. With him you almost need a special translator to make sense of anything he writes (and even the Dragon Naturally Speaking speech recognition software doesn't help much as it doesn't like his pronunciation). I'm sure that if you put in the effort you will improve (your artistic abilities are already great), and life has a tendency to keep people busy.

Reply Tanako, September 18th, 2012, 12:48 am

@Razmoudah: wow its that bad? Anyways, I didn't even know there was a program out there maybe I should look into it or something. I currently have someone helping me but I guess she missed that one. Well mistakes happen I guess I just have to be a bit more vigilant next time. And I'm sure she didn't catch it because she's actually good with her editing.

Reply Tanako, September 18th, 2012, 12:50 am

@Comichero: LOL I highly doubt it. Yes, you may guess some of the story line but believe me, it's so much more shit that's about to go down lol actually it's unpredictable and I assure you that. But as for right now, well all go with the flow of things :D can't wait to get into the next chapter with you guys!

Reply Razmoudah, September 19th, 2012, 9:55 am

@Tanako: My brother suffers from Dyslexia, which basically means that his brain doesn't properly separate the words when he reads them. He can easily understand what he reads, and so long as he doesn't have a mouth full of sunflower seeds at the moment his speech is fine (aside from some weird pronunciations, but our father has a minor speech impediment that gives him problems as well and I usually can't attempt to speed talk without the problem showing so it's most likely hereditary), it's just his handwriting and typing that suffer horribly from it. If you have a Verizon cell phone the voice-command program is made by the same company that makes Dragon Naturally Speaking, and it is designed as a learning software to learn how you say things and adapt to your speech patterns. My brother got it when he went to college last year, and the program was in the neighbor hood of $100 at that time, so it isn't a cheap thing to get. You'll still need to do some minor proofreading, if you aren't as you dictate to it (and it's the active editing that helps it learn your patterns), but it could be a help all the same. Besides, to err is human, so mistakes are going to happen at times, the best we can do is make efforts to minimize them fix things when the happen.

I'm also looking forward to what is going to happen, as I have the feeling that in another 2 or 3 chapters the relationship tangle is going to be so bad it'd give a Master Weaver who has studied String Theory a headache just contemplating (if you need help with the 'reference' read this strip ( http://worstedforwear.com/?p=445 ) of the comic Worsted for Wear).

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